拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Disposal bags have been used by most people in the world.We can see people who go out of market with a lot of disposal bags in their hands.If we buy things,we must use disposal bags. Nevertheless,there are many troubles due to using disposal bags.Firstly,making disposal bags uses a lot resources.Secondly,it will cause environment pollution.When disposal bags are making,there are too many chemical pollutants emit in the river which our presidents drink everyday and it will lead to many people sick.Disposal bags can't be broke down for a long time.They are buried into the land,many years later they are still there.It will cause land pollution. Nowadays,our government realize the importance of limiting the use of disposal bags and promulgate the plastic limit.When we go to the supermarket,using disposal bags will cost money.It will limit our using of plastic bags and do good to our environment.