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新东方托福高分作文:你喜欢早起还是晚起?

发布时间:2013-08-02 17:18浏览次数:1286
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【题目要求】

Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

【题目分析】

这是个非常私人的问题。尽管很多人都喜欢睡懒觉,但是“早起的好处”应该更容易写一些。有益于健康,可以去锻炼身体。早上大脑经过休息,相对更加清醒,适合学习。
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文中衔接词丰富;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,单词拼写方面要认真;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Some people tend to get up later in the day and stay up very late at night. From my perspective, however, getting up early in the morning and start my work in a earlier time is a better chioce. While I get up early in the morning, I can enjoy fresh air during morning. I can share more cherish time with my families. I can complete my works following definitely my scheme.

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