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I have a good friend ,she is name is feifei.We have knowing three years each other.She is very nice girl and she always to help other sutdent for the class,we all love her very much.Just you know she is very kindly. She always said to me:Hey,Cathy you should try your best to do everything!" I think i'll be.I'm very gland to have a good friend.