2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

When it comes to this hot topic, different people hold different attitudes. Some of them deem that it is a wise choice to make friends online because they think it can enlarges their circle of friends. While others consider it harmful to people, especially young adults. As for me, I see eye to eye with the former.And my reasons to support are listed as follow. To start with, I can speak freely with my net friends, which is impossible with my real-life friends. For example, when I fell into depression, I choose to give vent to my friends online because I'm afraid of becoming a source of worries to my friends if I do otherwise. In addition, friends online can provide me wider horizon of the world in which we live. So I can obtain much more information about the world, which enriches my life in return. Finally, when communicating with real-life friends, I can be the real myself without hiding anything. From the foregoing, a natural conclusion can be drawn that there are more advantages than disadvantages to make online friends. And those who ignore the importance of it are foolish. Therefore, open your heart and chat with your cyber friends. You will more or less benefit from it.