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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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From,hubin@163.com Date,23th Noverber 2013 To,KPOHsales@hotmail.com My name is hubin.I have kown your company's new thingth th in the patriy Newoy 15th to 22th Detember .Company's thingth number is 5670.I was very interesting in it.So please send me price list and instruction about it. Thank you to your compate,we will establish business relationship. Your serevity, hubin
