题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇基础扎实;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
With the rapidly development of technology, there is no doubt that computer has been a heated issue which closely relates to people's life. When mentioning how to use it, people sometimes find it difficult to reach a consensus due to their experiences and different values. Those who advocate over reliance on the computer believe that it is less likely to form yourself mind if you always solve the problem by using computers, since you would like to copy the answer on the computer. For one thing, young people waste a lot time on playing computer games. For another, some serious consequences can appear and even cause online syndrome. Nevertheless, those who insist on correct using computer say that people can get benefits from using computer. First of all, one may always save a lot of time in order to solve the problem. Furthermore, only computer can keep one abreast of time. Most important of all, the instant information is the source of power. Based on the statements above, I do think we should realize that we should guide young people to correctly look on using computer. Through this way, I have the confidence to use the computer correctly.