一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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Now i have a busy day.in te morning i have to help my mother do the housework and my homework.Afret do it ,i can play table tennis with my sincere friend xiaohua who is always help me when i am in trouble.In the aftereen,i can have a better food at home. I enjou eating with my parents.I think it is great time for me.As to the aftereen,i am ready to watch TV about teach program.It bring me a lot of laughter.