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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17434[网页划词已开启]
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分88.5分
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作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用学术词汇;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨。

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With the rapid development of technology, there is no doubt that computer has been a heated issue which closely relates to people's life. When mentioning how to use it, people sometimes find it difficult to reach a consensus due to their experiences and different values. Those who advocate over reliance on the computer believe that it is less likely to form yourself mind if you always solve the problem by using computers. For one thing, young people waste a lot time on playing computer games. For another, some serious consequences can appear and even cause the internet syndrome. Nevertheless, those who insist on proper use of computer say that people can get benefits from it. First of all, one may always save a lot of time in order to solve the problem. Furthermore, only computer can keep one abreast of time. Most important of all, the instant information is the source of power. Based on the statements above, I do think we should realize that we should guide young people in correct use of computer. Through this way, I have the confidence to use the computer correctly.

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