2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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It is wildly believed that our life can be very convenient with the help of computers.But what should we know at the same time is that computer can not diplace some other things we need to do by ourselves.Advantages comes with drawbacks.We have gain a lot from it,at the same time,we lose something as well. It is true that computers do good to all of us.A majority of latest information comes to our life through computers.We can keep in touch with the other side of world just by some clicks,which is very convenient.We can shopping online,buy whatever we want without walking out of our room.All of that has been brought to our daily life. Despite all of the advantages,there are still same difficiencies that we can not ignore.Those people who can not contoll themsevels correcotly will be abosorbed to computer games and TVs. People have less chance to communicate with each other face to face,instead of chatting online.,which will have bad impact on both the communication skills and the relationgship between people in the long time. As the saying goes,"everything has two sides",no exception with computer.We can not live without it in today world.All we could do is keepping our brain clear,making it a true good thing to us.