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Now,more and more parents treats their child as the eyes,which is particularly occur in the families with one child.They always do everything for their child that arrange their child's life,their child's studies and even their child's future. Howener,parents' excessive intervention to the child may result in many negative aspects.Firstly,when the parents always plan everything ,the child become serious rely on the parents so that they can't deal with problem that they confort in their own ability. Secondly,they will never go through the difficults and the hard of their life so that their psychological unable to bear if they meet the frustration.What's more,they cannot know the duty of the social. So,for my part,on the one hand,parents should chang their thoughts.They should know their childs are not the little kids and believe that their childs are able to handle the things that they come across.On the other hand, parents should let their child experience more training to make the child be independent.Only in these way can make the children become more indpendent and can build a solid foundation for their future.
