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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5523
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
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1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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Now,more and more parents treats their child as the eyes,which is particularly appear in the families with an onlychild.They always arrange everything for their child,including their child's life,their child's studies and even their child's future. Howener,parents' excessive intervention to the child may result in many negative aspects.Firstly,when the parents always plan everything ,the child become serious rely on the parents so that they can't deal with problem that they face in their own ability. Secondly,they will never go through the difficulties and the hard of their life so that they unable to bear if they meet the frustration.What's more,they cannot know the duty of the social. So,in my opinion,on the one hand,parents should change their thoughts.They should know their children are not the little kids and believe that their childs are able to handle the things that they come across.On the other hand, parents should let their child experience many trainings to make the child be independent.Only in this way can make the children become more indpendent and can build a solid foundation for their future.

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