2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；作者能词汇表达较准确熟练，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；连词使用偏少。

I think a strong will is essential to one,s success.If u want to have a bright future,u should study hard and persevering.A strong wil man can help u to ebodies u wort.So in yyour free time,u should focus on something and have a deseration to finish itsuccesfully.No matter what the reuselt of the event, u should follow u heart and enjoy the process of do it.just believe yourself. A strong will can finish a great mission.Look back in the history,There any famous people depend on their will lead to success. Edision is a good point . This also appliens to students.As college students,we should work very hard to comlete the task.Otherwise we could,t have become a useful person.