2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。

Nowadays large quantities of libraries are opening for the pubilc in free of charge,aiming at provid more opportunities for people to acquire knowledge and broaden their horizons. It is ture that many people benefit a lot from free admission to museums,but it indeed brings some problems at the same time. To begin with,lots of books will be stolen,due to many people get in library including theives .Moreover,books wil be destoryed,owing to some vandals who don't have the awareness of protecting books. In my points of view,it's great to have such an policy that many books are available to people,but regulations and restrictions should be maken to prevent books from stealing.Also,strenghten pubilc education is necessary to raise books protection awareness.Only in this way can it benefit people.