2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；作者词汇表达较丰富，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；采用了一些简单的从句。

At present,many items were excessive packaging it can result many people had to purchase this use much more high then before.So it became a hot debate which many people discuss it recently. I think there are at least three reasons for it.Firstly,with the development of our society,many people were better of along wih them their moral decline.So they want to sell items use higher prieces.Secondly,the seller intend to make profite though excessive packing.Thirdly,our society have not strict laws for prohibt this deed result in this phenomenon is serious and serious. So how to handle this problem is essential issue for us .On the one hand ,the Government should make up development laws.On the other hand as consumers we should have take a clear side to deal with this problem.