题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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For the time being it is in society that there is a prevalent phenomenon that much more people tend to discover the relationship between computer and man. Currently,great concern has arisen over this issue.Concerning this specific issue,a universal acknowledgement has been reached that human beings life has involved computers that has accelerated a variety of technology and can not be ignored by us. Those turning with an enthusiasm to computers maintain that,consistenly,it is computers that stimulate the dependence of a variety of business in different way,consisting of medicine,high-technology,physical and so on,which have an enormous impact on entire society.While,different opinions are held by different person simultaneously.a part of scholars contend that what has attracted millions students who tend to play games rather than study in schools is ,definitive,credit to computers. As far as I'm concered,there do exist some flaw of computers,and it appears that far more is at stake than obscene in net,while,it dependent on how to use computers.In brief,the contributions that computers have made are so great