2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章层次较为清晰。

My views on Online shopping Nowadays,our society has formed a fashion that is on online shopping.It means that the customer behavior of the person gradually changed. On online shopping takes many convenience for person,but it exists many problems.It provides many choices to us and saves our money and time. However,sometime,the quality of the goods are insure and the time we receive the goods can be put off. In my opinion,we should add our ability to recognize the goods when we are on online shopping.