2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

Nowadays, people tend to ignore the significance of psychological qualities when it comes to the qualities needed for success. In fact, nothing succeeds without a strong will. Living in a competitive society, pressure is something we can never evade, and a strong will is the bare necessity for us on the path to success. On the one hand, as is proved by history, only those people with a strong will can accomplish the great mission; On the other hand, people without a strong will is likely to be at a lost when the pressure emerge. The argument goes for students, too. One cannot become a person of ability without hard-working. In short, a strong will is indispensable for success.