2007年高考英语作文真题(山东卷):免费师范生

建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；没有能够有效地使用连接词和过渡词；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

This year,the Ministry of Education give orders concerning enroll a majority of students in order to get them back their hometown for teaching more then 10 years.I consider it is benefit for some students who can,t afford send the tuition.They can listen the class and live in dormitory free.I am absoulate agree with it and i hope to .Because it can save my parents burden and i have good interesting to teach students.I mean i have responsibility to repay the society.