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字数：300 满分：100分
过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；文中词汇使用较丰富，学术词汇使用要加强。
The importance of saving money Nowadays, with the increasing number of students have their own extra money per month from the parents or through the part-time jobs so that it would make some of them to spend more money even it is not necessary in their daily life. In my view, as students, we should save the money in different ways as possible unless it is essential. First of all, we can save money by collecting all kinds of coupons、looking for group-buy deals、buying clothes when they are on sale and so on.Through these, not only can we use the extra money to buy something we need but also train some good habits. Secondly, we may cherish the money from our parents via their hard-working, it just shows our love and consideration to them.Thirdly, perhaps we need money in the future because of something bad happen.What's more, we can donate the money to the charity to help those who really need it. Last but not least, saving money in our life is one of the great importance among us, our lives even the society will be harmonious as long as we cherish and make good use of them.
