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With the development of the information technology,more and more e-books come out.You can see the vision that the young people are reading an e-book by cellphones or computers everywhere.It becomes a tender to the whole world. Firstly,so some people think that e-books will replace traditional books,because they think e-books will be cheaper,and they won't pollute the environment,and they can read books very conveninent by cellphones or computers.Secondly,and the publisher will choose e-books,because e-books are more popular in nowadays society,and every preson in the world will choose to read e-books,and they can reduce their cost when they pubished their book.Thirdly,the paper's cost is too high,and the traditional books are not so good to store up. Even though e-books have so many good parts,I still think that traditional books are good for us to read.Not only to read them,but to smell them,actually,the smell of the books are so good,and you can write down some thought about the book.Always,we can buy a book to our friends as presents.