牛津英语八年级第四单元测试考试作文及范文

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Last week I went to the Beijing zoo. There were many people there. They played with monkeies and tigers. We really had a good time. The animals were very kindly and I thought that we must care about them, for animals are our friends. I knew the important of protecing the animals that day, because protecing animals is protecting ourselves.