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Internet is popular in today's world.Not only the old but also the youth use Internet everyday.They study or work by Internet,they also watch TV,play computer games or do other things by it. Some people think Internet can make studying and working more efficient.Studying on the Internet can be more interesting.We can learn things through a relaxing way.And there are a lot of studying resources on Internet.We can learn things that our teacher don't teach us in the class. Other people think many young people being addicted in Internet,so that it influence their studying.When they study,they still want to play games or watch TV.Finally,they lose interest in studying and without a single success. In my opinion,Internet is a good way to learn and work.It provides many resources to enrich our views.Nevertheless,it's important to limit our time using it.We can relax ourselves by playing games or watch TV,but we can't be addicted to it.Because we have more important things to do except it.
