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Dear John, I'm glad to receiving your invatation. I do love to go but I'm sorry that I can't. With the examination approaching, I have to study for it. It is so important that I can not ignore it. I'm very sorry and I hope that you could forgive me. To be honest, I am fond of having dinner with you. Had I reviewed my lessons, I would be in your home today. Wish you have a great time! I really miss you.How about making an appointment next time? I would be free after the day after tomorrow. How about you? Take me to your family. Yours, Li Hua