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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6310
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;文章层次较为清晰;文中学术词汇使用较丰富,但是拼写错误比较多。

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As is known to us,in modern society,it is essential to maintain trust in our everyday life.With the hige speed development of the economy and society,there are many fake phnomenon emerge everywhere so that there lost truth between peolpe.To be trust is the most basic moral quality in daily activity. The mportance to maintain trust is showed as follows.First of all,to be trust is the fundamental factor to keep the friendship forever.If one of the friends tells a lie to another,he or she would not be trust anymore and their friendship will reach a end corner.What's more, doing business should be trust.For example,two international company cooperate for their coomon goal,if there is no trust between them,there will be a great loss for both for them. In my opinion,maintaining trust is significant in our life,it will be a powerful strength to help us to benefit others or even to overome hardships successfully.

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