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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇。
With the development of civilisation,imnumerous kinds of species and plants were disappeared over thousands of years.Some negative persons feel desperated no matter what we would do in the future about this situation while the other think human can improve these problems if effective measures can be taken. Human activities,which include animal kill,cut of woods,various pollution or more,truly had negative effects on our Earth.Some effects such as disappear of animals or plants may not be restored forever.However,things that we should concern are our future but not our cruely history.We can not change the history while it is not impossible to design our future,Nature environment can be improved if we take suitable actions.For example,the slump of animals' number is always blame to lost of inhabitants.If human pay more attention on the homeless animals and leave them enough space to live,it would benefit for environment balance without thinking. In summary,human not only have enough abilities but also have sufficient reasons to improve our world,impossible is nothing unless you don't want to do it.
