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拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；可适当增加几条从句。
With the development of civilization,innumerable kinds of species and plants were disappear over thousands of years.Negative persons feel desperate no matter what we would do in the future about this situation while the other think we can improve these problems if effective measures can be taken. Human activities,which include kill of animals,fell of woods,various pollution or more,truly had negative effects on our Earth.Some effects such as disappearing of animals or plants may not be restored forever.However,things that we should concern are our future but not our cruelly history.We can not change the history while it is not impossible to design our future,Nature environment can be improved if we take appropriate actions.For example,the slump of animals' number is always blame for lost of habitats.If human pay more attention the homeless animals and leave them enough space to live,without doubt,it would benefit for environment balance. In summary,human not only have enough abilities but also have sufficient reasons to improve our world,nothing is impossible unless you don't want to do it.
