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With the developing of social,a lot of couples only have one child,so more and moe parents do anything for kids.For example,the child aready have 12 age or even more old that can't wash own's clothes and dishe.And,I saw the report that a universty student with his mother goes to school and live together ,why? A amazing reason that the universty student can't do anything in the daily life,he need his mother . In my opinion,the parents should teach their children do something by hemselve when they were young.Wash the clothes ,do the dishe,cooking,esc.And don't forget thinks,it's most important.After all,the parents can't do for them all the life.