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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5479
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
要求
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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简单的使用了一些复杂句,但从句使用不充分;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉;请注意分段。

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With the developing of social,a lot of couples only have one child,so more and moe parents do anything for kids.For example,the child aready have 12 age or even more old that can't wash own's clothes and dishe.And,I saw the report that a universty student with his mother goes to school and live together ,why? A amazing reason that the universty student can't do anything in the daily life,he need his mother . In my opinion,the parents should teach their children do something by hemselve when they were young.Wash the clothes ,do the dishe,cooking,esc.And don't forget thinks,it's most important.After all,the parents can't do for them all the life.

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