题目要求:
围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。
字数要求:
200字以内
学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段。
we are now live in the tall building, talking to the neighbors seems seldom to us. Especially the technology now carves our most of daily life, we have few time talk to our friends, our families. Facing the computer everyday, makes us more self center, less tolerated.More conflicts happens between us and other people. The one more impressive thing is the two cars met each other on the narrow street. The two drivers have no idea to let the other part run first. They sucks in the traffic jam both. Now the communication requires in emergence.Lack of communication affects our life affairs.