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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇。
BE A SMART CONSUMER In my opinion, to save money means we have to be careful with our money, especialiy for us --students . As a fully-consumed student,our expense almost comes from our parents. Let's be honest, those money doesn't belong to us, so how can we use it carelessly. What's more, as far as I can say collecting coupons, looking for group-buy deals and buying clothes in a sale are smart,because we learn not only to save money but also to live effectively. In a word, a smart consumer is the one who can deal with money carefully.