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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13015
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
评语:

学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;从句使用很不错,再接再厉。

用户练习作文:

As we all know that connecting with people around us has been extremely crucial in our life. Having conversations with our parents and friends when we sit together make us relaxing and happy, I have to say that means a lot to us. First, having conversations with parents sometimes is a good way that they would give our more understanding and supporting, since the more time goes the larger generation gap between us. Second, learning to connect with our co-workers also is an important ability to help us in the workplace. For instance, since commuters have a lot competes, so they have to do some jobs or decisions which could make others uncomfortable. In this circumstance, people need to chat to each other in order to defuse the misunderstanding to keep the friendship. Last, the most significant thing is that talking to people even pets "how's the day before" or the trouble we got recently could releave our body and mind. It means that listening, talking not only be a key part of our body but aso a key path toward the depth of or heart.

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