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Today,It is important for us to create a green campus.A green campus is not only refer to the green environment,but also many students in campus be full of youthful spirit. How can we solve this problem.At first thought,the problem seems far too involved but it can certainly be solved when seriously dealt with.I think we can put into effect in three steps. First of all,we should protect the campus environment.We can not throw things all over the place.Besides,we can encourage students to arouse them enthusiam.Finally,we also can organizes some activities to promote schoolmates emotion. In conclusion,the way I have mentioned above should never be separate from each other.I hope we can change campus more great.