Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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From the picture we recognize that degree of education matters person earnings and unemployment rate much. Higher education degree , higher earnings and lower unemployment rate. The ones less than high school diploma get the lowest pays and the highest unemployment rate.while opposites the ones professional degree. Yes ,it reflects current trends. As the old saying goes ,knowledge is power.