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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5520
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
要求
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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从句使用量稍显不足;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;请注意分段。

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With the development of society,a lot of couples only have one child,so more and moe parents do anything for kids.For example,the children have already 12 age or even more old that can't wash clothes and dish.And,I saw the reported that a university student with his mother goes to school and live together ,why? How amazing a reason that the university student can do nothing in the dailylife,he must need his mother . In my opinion,the parents should teach their children do something by themselve when they were young.Wash the clothes ,do the dishe,cooking,esc.And don't forget thinks,its most important.After all,the parents can't do everything for them all the life.

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