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With the development of society,a lot of couples only have one child,so more and moe parents do anything for kids.For example,the children have already 12 age or even more old that can't wash clothes and dish.And,I saw the reported that a university student with his mother goes to school and live together ,why? How amazing a reason that the university student can do nothing in the dailylife,he must need his mother . In my opinion,the parents should teach their children do something by themselve when they were young.Wash the clothes ,do the dishe,cooking,esc.And don't forget thinks,its most important.After all,the parents can't do everything for them all the life.