文章层次较为清晰;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;词汇量积累方面尤其学术词汇的积累要再接再厉,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
Chinese as a culture always live with everyone. But in recent year, a phenomenon that plenty of students are ignoring the study of china is emerging. Many resons can explain the situation. To commence, as the spread of English and important role in every aspect, an increasing number of youths regard the English as a mangitind skill can help them get extra bonus point in study and life. At the similiar time, students reckon there is no need to study chinese specially, because now we can use it prefectlly. This will result in most of students forget the real sprit of their mother language. For my part, I consider we should give attention to study of Chinese. Although the state of Chinese can't be influenced by the widespread of English, it not only is our first language, but also represent our tradition and culture. Today, our students have responsibility to take action to learn it well.