作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是学术词汇使用较恰当;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;文章层次较为清晰。
Chinese as a culture always live with everyone. But in recents year, a phenomenon that plenty of students are ignoring the study of china is emerging. Many reasons can explain the situation. To commence, as the spread of English and important role in every aspect, an increasing number of youths regard the English as a major skill can help them get extra bonus point in study and life. At the similar time, students reckon there is no need to study chinese specially, because now we can use it prefectly. This will result in most of the students forget the real sprit of their mother language. For my part, I consider we should give attention to study of Chinese. The state of Chinese can't be influenced by the widespread of English, it not only is our first language, but also represent our tradition and culture. Today, our students have responsibility to take action to learn it well.