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1999年专四作文真题:电视广告的优缺点

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:11浏览次数:7912
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Direction:We see advertisements on television everyday. Some people think that TV advertising brings as benefits, but others don’t think so. What is your opinion? A major advantage/disadvantage of advertising on television
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The advantages of advertising on television As we all know, advertising is becoming a part of our lives especially on television when we turn on the TV. And most of the people who debate on this hot topic, some people think it as benefits, and others disagree. Anyway, in my eyes, I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. First of all, we can contact with the new products via the advertisements on TV which is more convenient than go outdoors.What's more, it is of great conciseness for us to get the information about it, of course, it always depends on the famous stars who will make people feel more not only the security but also the trust. Secondly, the advertisements show their new idea even the originality in many ways to attract our eyes so that we can learn a lot from these and also can bring it into effect in our daily lives. It is patent that the advertisement on TV come into our lives gradually due to the fact that our market becomes stronger and our consumers focus on the new things.However, it is a good phenomenon that the economic development and influence all around the global world will be more considerable.

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