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It is very convenient to use the internet to communicate with others if you have a computer.You can chat with him or her by sending a message,or you can see each other when you miss him or her.It's a great way to make your distence shorten.And when you feel alone but you don't want to tell someone you know,you can use the internet to find a stranger to voice your feeling. However,not all agree with the oppinions above.They think that it's harmful to our friendship.When we communicate with others by internet,it seems that you don't respect the other,even you don't mean that.It may also make friends become more far away from one another because of too much internet communication rather than meet. It's known to us all that every coin has two sides.And for us ,we should learn how to take advanges of it but without any backwards.
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