2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays, online shopping has become a fashion. More and more people like shopping on the Internet instead of traditional shopping. Every coin has two points, as well as online shopping. On one hand, there are some advantages. Firstly, online shopping goods are cheaper than entity shop. Secondly, it's convenient for people who don’t have time to go shopping. On the other hand, online shopping also has some problems. One of the examples is that customers can only see pictures and the evaluation of others. So they don’t know the real quality of the products before received them. From where I stand, we should be careful to online shopping. What we should do are that searching a believable shop and chose the goods patiently. Only in those ways, can us shopping online happily.