拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;作者应适量增加从句的使用量。
Nowadays,more and more digital products are coming out,such as digital TVs,digital cameras and digital films,etc.So many of them,which is impacted our daily life,not only our studies and works,but also our vision about the world. The digital products are becoming important part of our daily life,then we can watch all of the world's channels.And by watching oversea's channels to study other countries' languages,and we can learn other countries' cultural.By digital cameras to catch the beautiful landscape of the nature,and filmed happy days by them.There are some digital learning machines,using them study our courses.As we see,the digital products are helpful thing for us,and they are very useful. But every kind of product will have its negative part,the digital products have,too.Firstly,they make us lazy,then we won't use our mind to think or our hands to calculate.Secondly,these products are always have radiation,which is harm to our health.And thirdly,because of the digital products that we don't have much time to go outside to enjoy the beauty nature and breath the fresh air.