作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。
Every university sets up many different,interesting optional courses.The optional courses as supplements of required courses make our school life more colorful and more educational. There are many optional courses for our students,such as college Chinese,world poems,secretarial science,social etiquette,science of religion and other courses.Some students take the courses only for getting credits,nevertheless most students take the courses because of acquiring knowledge.Students choose the courses according to their interests.Students who are major in economics may not choose economical courses,because other courses which they don't study everyday will broaden their views.Science students may choose literature as their optional courses which will make them relaxed after tedious calculations.Literature arts students may choose math courses to promote their logic mind. As for me,I like sports very much.Nevertheless,there is little time for me to exercise during my weekday,so I choose sports which I like to meet the needs of exercising.It not only can enhance my physical fitness,but also can make me happy.