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Nowadays,more and more digital products are coming out,such as digital TVs,digital cameras and digital films,etc.So many of them,which is impacted our daily life,not only our studies and works,but also our vision about the world. The digital products are becoming important part of our daily life,then we can watch all of the world's channels.And by watching oversea's channels to study other countries' languages,and we can learn other countries' cultural.By digital cameras to catch the beautiful view of the nature,and to film our daily life.There are learning machines,using them study our courses.As we see,the digital products are a helpful thing for us,and they are very useful. But every kind of product will have its negative part,the digital products have,too.Firstly,they make us lazy,then we won't use our minds thinking or our hands calculating.Secondly,these products are radiative,which is harm to our health.And thirdly,due to the digital products,then we don't have much time to go outside to enjoy the beauty nature or to breath the fresh air.