2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；若注意文中一些句法错误，文章会更不错；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，可是单词拼写做的不错。

As we all known ,if you want to make something to it that need a important quality _strong will ,Because ti is a guarantee to you success . each great people have a common quality ,that is strong will ,only people who has the strong will might to success and finish great mission. As a student ,we shoud encourage ourself to form that a good quality ,we could not get any achievement if we do not study hard and never become a useful people.