2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；能够简单的使用一些长句，但句法错误偏多；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写方面也要加强；请注意分段。

I thing everyone who wants to achieve success of himself need to make hard work, because of "No pain, no gain" . The successer of life who always have the same character such as convenience,kind,hard. What's the true story of my daddy who is a hardly man and made his fortunes in his young