2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者在句法层面做的很棒；单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Now,more and more parents do everything for their children.But it is bad for their children's independent in the future,because of if everything have somebody to do for children,they could lack of the action to deal with something,so lack experiences ,and shortage of independent. If you want to your children have being enough independent,please let's go.