2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可适当增加从句的使用；单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Now,more and more parents do everything for their children.But it is bad for their children's independence in the future,because of if everything is somebody doing for children,they could lack of the action to deal with something,so lack experiences ,and short of independence. If you want to your children have being enough independent,please let's go.