高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Good days, Please let us know the latest status of below certs. It’s passed more than four months since we have been submit the S/N and shipyard information to you. I urgently need to get the certificate for Tongfang Jiangxin shipbuilding Co., Ltd. The vessel will be deliver in 2/12/2013. For this genset certificates, we met with customer complaints many times, could you help to push it again, and send me electrical version ASAP.