字数:200满分:100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子,一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人,一个垂头丧气的说“全完了!”,而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿!”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时,不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面,而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之,一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来,我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难,我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样,我们才能取得成功。
作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用学术词汇;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
When seeing the title and outline,if we think hard enough,we can tangibly discover a not uncommon phenomenon that different people can gain different life who have various attitudes toward opportunity.Some people consider opportunity as the most crucial factor in their life. Perhaps we have no better way to appreciate the phenomenon than by studying the following influential factors.Without opportunity,they assume, without success.As a result,they expect opportunity to come whole-heartedly and complain a lot in their view that opportunity for one's success is important but not decisive.Without opportunity,yet without knowledge and skill,they believe,the opportunity is doomed to slip away. Different as the attitudes are,opportunity is considered as an important factor that no one should neglect.It is true that opportunity can enable a person to successful.A person with opportunity is just like a person in the darkness being given a light,which will lead him to success and glory.Missing it,on the contrary,nothing will be left but regret and disappointment.Furthermore,some opportunities are so rare and valuable that everyone should grasp and make good use of them. I would not go that far consequently,we have no difficulty but can obtain a verdict that it is not opportunity itself than can decide a person's success or failure.In my opinion,opportunity is fair to ever person.What really counts is that it is not essential how lucky you are to come across more opportunities but how capable you are to grasp and take advantage of them to better your future.To gain this capability,one needs knowledge,skill and experience.In a word,the idea that I want to emphasize is properly conveyed by a proverb:Opportunity are only for the prepared minds.