2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

According to the chart,it is clear that the unemployment rate in 2001 is decreasing following the increasing of education pays ,but ,the median weekly earnings is increasing following the increasing of education pays.So, I think knowledage is of great importance in the carrer. First of all ,we begin to learn at an early age so that we can find a good job ,which means we have higher earing to live comfortable life.Secondly ,if we spend much education pays ,we will have more knowledage and the ability of competition, the company can conserve many money to train me ,because I was trained in the school.As a result ,the more education pays ,the more lower unemployment rate and higher median weekly earning. With the development of the modern society ,it is certain knowledge is power ,so ,We should sudy harder from now on ,only in this way can we have a better life .