2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；可增加从句和复杂句的使用；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了。

According to the chart, it is clear that the rate of unemployment in 2001 decreases along with the increasing of education pays ,but ,the earnings of median weekly is increases along with the increasing of education pays. So, I think knowledge is of great importance in the career. First of all, we begin to learn at an early age so that we can find a good job, which means we have higher earning to live comfortable life. Secondly, if we spend much education pays, we will have more knowledge and the ability of competition, the company can conserve much money to train me, because I was trained in the school. As a result, the more education pays, the more lowly the rate of unemployment and higher the earning of median weekly. With the development of the modern society, it is certain knowledge is power, so, we should study harder from now on, and only in this way can we have a better life.