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Are you fond of dancing?Do you enjoy the atmosphere when you dance in the enormous stage?Do you like to show yourself to others?Welcome to our dancing club,we will give you the precious opportunity to do it. Our dancing club is built at the beginning of our school establishment,so it has a long history.Our dancing teachers work on dancing for many years,they are experienced and easygoing.When you don't learn one time,just ask them to display once more,they will not be bored.They also have good mental abilities,you can make friends with them and you can acquire skills not only about dancing,but also about being a good person.Our students are diligent.Dancing is a work which should practice time by time,you may learn this time,if you don't go over after class,you won't to know how to dance next time.Our students win a lot of prizes in and outside our province.As long as you persist,you can gain the opportunity to show yourself on the large stage.We often hold dancing parties in our campus,you will find friends who have the same interests with you and be confidence in yourself. Dancing is a sport which will keep you fit and elegant.Although you are not good at it now,you may be afraid of it now,if you like it,just trust yourself that you will make it.So join us in the moment!
